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Showing posts with label Stuff my students say. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Stuff my students say. Show all posts

Sunday, July 6, 2014

Overheard in Homeroom

Eyebrows are way down my list
of things about which to be concerned--
as a matter of fact, they
don't make the list at all,
but in room 305 at 7:40 a.m.
they constitute a crisis
as the girl looks at her reflection
in a compact and
brushes and tweezes,
while I, on the other side of 
the large desk, ponder
the difference between an
85 and an 88.
"Eyebrows are sisters, not twins," 
another girl offers, as I mumble
metaphor quietly.
So it goes, different orbits
but still the same
rumination and brooding, 
insistence on what is important,
things that concern us so 
at one point in life making way
for others unpredicted,
as I smile and thin lines
frame my eyes, my pen
loops two green eights,
and I raise one uncorrected
brow (one brother?), if not
in solidarity, then at least
in insight. 

Sunday, July 22, 2012

Hard Time


No one tells me what to do,
you tell me no but I do it anyway,
'cuz I'm my own person,
the student says amid the
familiar desks, chairs, windows,
grubby floor tiles. He is a
shape, too: a box in a seating chart,
a check in a column, a lump at a desk,
all hard angles, sounding off
his song that he would swear is
unique in its singular note
of defiance, saying I AM--
the walls and the floors
have heard it all before,
small-room big talk
that rings out and dissipates
like chalk erased into
clouds of choking dust,
shouting it out over others' heads,
brazen morning orator issuing
forth from his rocky outcrop,
this risk-taker, cliff diver,
reckless driver, nothing without
his audience, sycophant circle
minions for each other,
thug-lite insubordination brothers,
soon to be free from this
sentence of kindergarten to twelfth,
hard time on the inside.

Monday, May 10, 2010

Stuff my students say

Me: The next play we will read is Fiddler on the Roof.

Student: Why is he on the roof?


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Student: Extended metaphors? This writing isn't realistic. No guys think in extended metaphors!

Me: Well, I do.

Student: Well, then you're a keeper.

It's haiku time again in creative writing class

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