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Tuesday, September 7, 2010

Tonight's ride, haiku and tanka

I.

A line of cyclists
in early fall’s sharp light—bees
seeking late honey.


II.

A line of cyclists
in early fall’s fading light—
they hum along while
the sun slowly sinks, shadows
stretch—bees seeking late honey.
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1 comment:

Karen said...

This evokes so clearly for me the soft contenting and soul-warming chill of an Autumn's evening bike ride. Thank you for sharing it :-)

September 12, 2010 at 6:19 PM

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